Touching story.I loved it! I hope they had breakfast together before they left. There are still people out there who truly see others and care and get involved.
Thanks, Tina, and yes, despite dour news stories and endless negativity and gloomy prognostications, there are still good people in the world. And their good deeds comfort, inspire, reassure, and even change lives.
A tear-jerker, John. Would have liked to know more of her story, before and after your snippet, but that's a short story, isn't it? The good ones leave you wondering, wanting more. I know there are many people like Jonce and the waitress and the cook in the world. I wish we heard more about them and less about those few who do evil.
Touching story.I loved it! I hope they had breakfast together before they left. There are still people out there who truly see others and care and get involved.
Thanks, Tina, and yes, despite dour news stories and endless negativity and gloomy prognostications, there are still good people in the world. And their good deeds comfort, inspire, reassure, and even change lives.
Beautiful story. I love your writing, so tender and evocative.
Thanks for reading, Ricky.
Wonderful writing. Imagery made me feel. Thanks, John!
You’re welcome, Paul, glad you liked it.
Beautifully written. A struggle, a rest, kindness, and a new beginning.
Thanks, Beth-Ann.
That's beautiful, John. You have a way of portraying the good in every situation. That's something that appeals me the most.
Thanks for reading, Jyothi. Here’s to the quiet acts of kindness and love in the world.
Loved this. And then what…? More, please. And thank you.
Thanks, Brenda. Sometimes open ended stories have more impact. The reader gets to imagine what comes next.
Ah, got it. I like that.
I imagine that most people are much too tired to do much of anything but to take a rest after eating and fall asleep thereafter
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Cute dinosaur image, Walter, thanks.
you are most welcome
A tear-jerker, John. Would have liked to know more of her story, before and after your snippet, but that's a short story, isn't it? The good ones leave you wondering, wanting more. I know there are many people like Jonce and the waitress and the cook in the world. I wish we heard more about them and less about those few who do evil.
Thanks Bob, and I agree. We usually hear about the evil ones. I suppose that's why I often weave kind people into my stories.
Beautiful story. I signed up for more of your beautiful writing and stories.
Thanks, Maureen, I appreciate the interest.
Beautiful detail revealing your "noticing" and how deeply you care